Welcome to Canine Controversy! We're a street dog roleplay set in the streets of the fictional city of Cairoco. Here on the site you can find lots of active members to roleplay with, along with friendly staff who are always open to suggestions or questions you might have. We hope to see you around soon!
New Skin!
As you can probably see, we have a new skin! I hope you like it, but if not, I'm going to try and make it so you can switch back to the old one without much hassle. This requires some technical shenanigans that I first need to master/apply, so you might have to wait a few days first. ^.^ <3 Vixxy
Member clearout!
Hopefully you all got my PM about this sent over two weeks ago - all old members who haven't logged in in over a year have been deleted, as this should help the site load a little faster. I've done my best to avoid deleting members who have been posting recently but have remained invisible for so long. If you're a returning member after a whole year and want your old account back, if you re-register with your same username it should update your old posts to be written with your new account, and send me a PM if you want your experience points back, and just generally try to restore your account as well as I can. To put it into perspective, over 1,100 accounts were deleted! <3 Vixxy
Weather Moderate snowfall covers almost the entire city as winter returns to the lands once again. The temperature is often cold but never unbearably so, and for the well-prepared dog the weather could almost be enjoyable.
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Icarus Fresh on the scene, Icarus is ripping up the town with her two characters, front man Icarus and good guy Zuuro. She's often in the cbox and tends to carry a rather nice conversation, however full of innuendos it may be. Between her activity and her wit she's earned her spot and deserves some recognition.
Cash Recently ascended to supremacy of the Lords of Debauchery (Plus One Chick), Cash has been making his mark in Cairoco City. After a random fling two Springs ago, he finally managed to get the girl of his dreams, Kjara, and totes his son Bank around with him. Hosting a party at the Office Building, he's the front man and the big man, and it's his choice who's in and who's out. Full of charm and with an eye catching red gleam, he's the 'it' dog in town.
Skin (c) to VIXEN of C.C. UBBC buttons (c) to WICKED. All posts, pictures and anything else are (c) to the members who made them.
Minos stood at the gates of the cemetery, his pale yellow eyes searching frantically for any sign of life in the darkness. Every now and then a warm summer breeze would stir around the sleeping trees and send their leaves dancing in the night, sounding an awful lot like the whispers of pack members waiting in the shadows to pounce on the considerable threat at the entrance – or perhaps more fittingly, the murmurs and sighs of ghosts gone by, wondering who this stocky stranger at their gates might be. Either way, Minos was only concerned with one thing, and the business of spirits was not one of them. A plan had been forming in the back of his mind for some time now, nebulous and hazy for so long, and finally fitting into place with a satisfying click in recent days. Too long had he been roaming the city without a purpose, with a whole lot of ambition pointed towards nowhere in particular. Too long had he pictured the smirking, scarred face of his sibling on his now-crumbled throne, getting the upper hand before Minos even had a chance. Icarus had managed to better his brother even after all that had happened between them in the past, and it only took the final decision from Minos himself to do something about it. One way or another, it would end tonight.
His heart did powerful leaps in his chest as he placed a heavy paw past the rusty gates, and into the grassy murk of the cemetery. Tombstones stood like jagged teeth in the starlight, jutting out of the ground at random intervals. It was painfully obvious to Minos how easy it would be for an ambush to be laid, with any number of dogs after his blood waiting behind the stony barriers. It sent adrenaline coursing through his veins until his body felt powered on battery acid, and God did he love it. Too long he had spent in the dull indifference that washed over most strays in the city. It had been too long since he had felt the thrill of the fight that used to be a daily occurrence in the ring, and too long since he had last felt the pure unadulterated feeling of living. That was all about to change, and if he played his cards right, it would change the whole damn city.
He pushed on further into the cemetery, his senses positively buzzing with anticipation of attack, until he something up ahead caught his eye. It was an almost unbelievably old and dilapidated church, almost falling over with all those years pressing down on its back. The moon was not full tonight, and so Minos felt he was somehow missing out on some shred of splendour it might possess in the light. Not that it mattered – it was somewhere to make his stand, and that was all he needed. Picking up the pace and trotting forwards, it took all the willpower in his body not to lash out and howl for attention right now, and get whatever was about to happen over and done with. But through some feat of strength he didn’t even knew he had, he reined it back before he finally stood before the decrepit building. Warily, and not sure how much weight they would take, he climbed the first few steps towards its large oak doors. Before long he stopped, deciding there was not much point in stretching it out further, and sat down heavily on the final step. This was it, at long last.
Throwing his head towards the sky, he was about to announce his arrival before the final realisation that all he had planned could come from a former police-occupied territory hit him, and he had to bring his head back down to stifle his laughter in the cropped fur of his chest. The irony would become all too obvious for some in due time. Swallowing down his amusement and getting back into the correct mindset once again, he tossed his head back one final time and immediately released a howl loud enough to surprise even him; it rang through the silent cemetery with devastating strength, and every fleeting tone and note sang with his cruel intentions. It was primal, savage, and oh-so ingrained into every dog’s DNA. It was a call for conflict. A call for war. Holding the howl until it felt as if every possible breath had been exhausted, he finally stopped and came spinning back down to normality, getting instantly to his feet and searching the surrounding area with the highest possible intensity. Something amazing was going to happen soon – he could almost taste it.
Terms
I don't know, maybe two fighting posts each? I'm not good at this. XP Is about a week okay for a time limit to post? It can be shorter/longer, I don't mind. Errr, probably no deaths or grievous bodily harm. XD If I win, he'll probably just ask everyone to leave or let those who want to stay, stay (although this seems unlikely as he's a bit of a douche). If you win, Minos will never approach the Iron Battalion again, and can very much be put on the wanted list if you like.
Re: Another cog in the murder machine [c] « Reply #3 on Nov 21, 2009, 9:46pm »
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»»The stifled chuckle, a soft breathy sound had first alerted her, but waking from her deep slumber did not immediately allow acute awareness and so, she brushed it away with a flick of her ears, it was just her imagination. The howl, so intent on war, on a conflict she did not condone rumbled in the air, so loud and clear that it shook, rebounding off every wall in the old Church. Eyes snapped open as her laying frame twisted and lurched upward. A muffled thud alerting the intruder of her presence. For a moment she just stood there, her heart racing as she waited, expecting Darrius to answer this call, it was clearly a challenge. With a sinking in her chest, it came back to her, Darrius was gone, and it was up to her to take this challenge. Lips twitched as her eyes closed momentarily. Taking in a shaky breath she began to move. Her body mechanically making its way to the entrance as her mind struggled to wake itself as well as regain some composure.
»»By the time she made it to the door, every cell in her body was awake, her senses so intensely alert that the scratching of a leaf blowing across the ground had her flinching. The ghostly form she saw, so casually resting on the step of the stairs, made her pause again, stormy sea blue eyes brewing into a hurricane as she took in the sight. Lips twitched once more. For a moment she thought of walking away, as she glanced over her shoulder into the darkness of the church, she was alone there, the Cemetery deserted it seemed. Yet, she had no choice. How could she face the General if she had simply walked away? Let the Battalion fail because of her. She wouldn't. Couldn't. Turning back to the ghoulish intruder she nodded, moving forward with her casual stride, descending the steps two at a time before turning and silently facing him.
»» "Who are you?" Her voice was formal, but it held an edge. It really did not matter who he was, he was a cruel dog, by the sound of his howl, by the very look of him, and that was all she needed to know. Briefly she wondered why the Cemetery? Why not the hidden territory somewhere on the mountain? Of course, she knew. The Cemetery was in town, with low activity, it was ideal for anyone starting a pack. Shaking herself casually, she waited, there would be no blood spilt in the place she slept, the fighting was always done in front of the weak building. This was his fight, but as it was on her territory, she would pick the location, or there would be no fight at all.
»»Slowly her skull lowered, her frame lowering as her limbs bent, placing herself in a defensive position, making it clear who would start the fight. As much as she wanted to lash out and begin the fight, to attempt to hold what did not really belong to her, but she restrained herself, he was the challenger and it was an unspoken rule that it he who had the right to start the fight, not her. I hate these rules... She thought quietly, as her limbs began to tremble with anticipation. Her thoughts were slowly pushing in on her, what if she did not win? How would she face Darrius? She couldn't. Cordelia would have let him down, she would have to tell him that she was weak and could not fight for what she believed in. How could she do that?
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It came as quite a shock to hear someone approaching from behind, and a mixture of panic and fury flashed through his mind like an angry firework. He had been inside, all along, waiting behind Minos the whole time? The muscular dog had been a sitting duck, and blissfully unaware of it. This stranger had been laying in wait, potentially picking out Minos’ weaknesses and finding the perfect place to start his attack…
But no. It wasn’t his attack. As the all-consuming shock managed to fade away enough for Minos to get a moment of comparative clarity, he realised the dog approaching him was a female. This was what he had to contend with? All the images in his mind of an encounter of two, evenly matched brutes and the subsequent fight almost unrivalled in strength disappeared into smoke in a flash. Minos wasn’t entirely sure if he had actively confronted a girl before – all the opponents he had faced in the ring had merged into one greyish ball of anonymity long ago – and the prospect of doing so managed to allowed caution (or as close as Minos could manage it) to creep into the back of his mind. But the real reason behind why he was here, and the delicious prospect of what could happen if he succeeded, managed to overpower his tentative concerns. Snapping back into the correct mindset, he felt his body harden all over in preparation. All that was left to do now was release the tension, the only way he knew how.
“Does it matter?” He replied as calmly as he could manage, his voice trembling slightly with anticipation more than fear as she passed him on the steps. A coldness shivered through his body as they nearly made contact, that even in the balmy summer night felt like it would be at home in the coldest of winters. Part of him braced for a sudden attack, the rush of pain and adrenaline that he hadn’t felt in what felt like years. But it didn’t come. Instead, the bitch was standing still with her body slightly lowered, with the slight tremor in her limbs that he recognised in his own. What was she doing? Minos wasn’t used to this organised sort of fighting – the kind that resulted from following the unwritten rules in the city that governed most of the strays living there – and instead he was much more accustomed to the merciless, all-or-nothing chaos that he had been born and bred into. It could be a lot worse, of course, and he quickly made mind to take advantage of the situation while it still presented itself.
With surprising stealth and speed considering his bulky build, Minos propelled himself off the step and straight for the female. He had decided long ago to waste no time with his attacks, and his eager paws stretched out yearningly for her shoulders and neck; his gaping jaws were headed directly towards the face (which, he noticed in a flash, was surprisingly already riddled with scars). The world seemed to somehow turn in slow motion as he almost flew towards his target, but the unusual sensation was lost on him, consumed by the desire to shred, tear, destroy. It was what he had been built to do, generations of fine-tuning honing down the most vicious impulses and deadliest traits. The excitement of doing something he had been doing all his life and turned into almost an art crackled through him like electricity, and it was frankly a small miracle in itself that he didn’t near blackout when some kind of contact was made. Unsure (or at least not caring to know) what position he was in, he simply clamped down as hard as he could and ripped his head brutally from one side to the other, doing as much damage as he could in the small moments he knew were probably all he had.
Re: Another cog in the murder machine [c] « Reply #5 on Nov 22, 2009, 2:03pm »
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»»The battalion leader watched as a flurry of emotions flung themselves onto his countenance. Shock seemed the strongest, lingering longer as he stared at her, dismayed by something, perhaps because she was a female? Was he not up to par with the facts? A soft chuckle tickled her throat and was quickly snagged by a caressing summer breeze. Perhaps he should have gathered information about the Cemetery owner before barging in? It would, in her mind, have been wise. He slowly reeled in his emotions, getting himself back in play for what he wanted. To fight. To win. By the cropping of his ears, she could only presume that he was a fighting dog, possibly from the league, or from some human of the same twisted mindset. For a brief moment, she pitied the poor brute, living a life of fighting and nothing else, but just as quickly she was reminded that he was here, on her door step and not in a blood stained ring.
»»His calm words caused a snort to be shoved into the air. "To me it does." Her voice had become somewhat harder, though it lacked the rough, masculine, tone that he had been expecting upon entering the cemetery. Cordelia watched as he tried to work something out, somehow put off by her actions. It was obvious he was not used to such formalities, he stood on the steps like an idiot for several long seconds, trying to put the pieces together. He did, unfortunately, realize his advantage as he stood there, and it was with a slight feeling of dread that she noticed it herself. What had she just put herself into? Stormy, ocean-like, blue eyes became fixated on the ghostly figure with newly found intensity, every twitch of muscle was drawn in, but she already knew his first action, before he even took it. With nimble dexterity and speed, he launched himself from the step, aiming for her without touching ground first. He sailed through the air, and she watched, as if she were not part of the fight at hand. Yet, there he came, closer and closer, and she lowered herself even more automatically, rolling her shoulder and shifting her weight so that if it were a firm collision she could roll. Drawing in one last calm breath, the fight began.
»»It started with a sickening thud, as claws raked over and down her shoulder, the pain was blinding, but not nearly as strong as what came next, the impact was strong enough to cause a roll out of her frame, but his jaws were already firmly attached to the muscled flesh of her ribcage. Cordelia felt the tear in her skin, the agonizing pain, and the white-hot feeling of blood running down her side, and her shoulder. It dripped to the ground, but whether it pooled there and congealed, she was not sure. Her frame struggled, writhing on the ground as the shepherd female attempted to regain her paws. The pain that she felt as her left forelimb hit the ground caused her to grit her teeth as she launched into her attack.
»»After gritting her teeth, Cordelia had to force her jaws to open as she reached for his leg, intent on ripping it from his socket, even if it meant creating a gruesome gash in her side. Her jaws snapped shut as soon as she felt something between, the force behind was not exactly bone crushing, but it was enough to cause severe pain. Her left paw pressed into the ground, her teeth grinding against whatever they had as she tried not to whimper in pain. Her frame shifted testing his hold on her skin before her hindquarters swung back towards him, her upper torso following suit, hoping to jostle him enough to let go, but she doubted it.
»»Cordelia was already desperate in this battle, already she was shying away from the fight section of her brain, and directing her energy towards flight, but even it was too distant for her to lock firmly on to. The familiar face of Darrius swam before her vision when she tried to reach that flight section of her instincts, a rebellious jolt being sent through her, but it was not determination that she felt. Only the pathetic feeling of not having a choice but to fight, not to live, but so when he returned, she could stand proudly by his side. Without any ideas left except to get away from him, her haunches bunched and she lurched to his right side, whatever had been in her jaws, still firmly there. This fight was not for the Battalion, she did not fight to keep them going, to give them a headquarters, this was for Darrius. So he could look at her with a sense of pride, so he would know she did not sit around and do nothing in his absence. Cordelia had no choice, she could not fail him.
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It felt sickeningly good to pin her down on the floor like that, and whilst he had missed his original mark in the form of her face, he would make do with what he managed. Blood was starting to flow like wine, and the intoxicating smell of it almost had a narcotic affect on the dog. The writhing body beneath him and feel of his own teeth gripping into the flesh of another was nearly hypnotic. He wasn’t a complete psychopath – if anything, he could pride himself on that – and whilst his consuming passion for fighting may have seemed unusual to others, it came as naturally to him as breathing. At no point was he completely sure if the blood he tasted was his own or belonged to the female beneath him, but at no point did it matter. His pale yellow eyes blurred hazily in and out of focus as he continued to rip his jaws this way and that, doing as much damage as he could muster whilst he still had a grip, and so intense was his distraction it wasn’t until a good few seconds had passed that he felt the pressure on his leg. No, more than pressure – much more.
Snapping himself out of the trance-like state he had worked himself into, a quick glance at his left foreleg revealed the bitch had clamped herself down, and firmly. He could feel her teeth under his skin, ripping deep into the muscle and sinew and doing unknowable damage deep within. A snarl burst furiously from his throat and for the briefest of moments released his hold on her ribcage, and even after snapping desperately back for such a fine grip again, he was fully aware he had lost the advantage his earlier position had gained. Now it was back down to basics, the truest form of fighting he had been reared on. No tricks, no stunts, just grabbing on to what you could and breaking.
The growls rattling out of his mouth continued to come thick and fast as he felt her weight shift beneath him, and with a surprising feat of strength she regained some sort of level footing. Minos’ leg, however, had remained firmly clamped in her jaws, and a sickening crack, sharper and cleaner than the snapping of dry wood, pierced the air loudly over the other general sounds of disturbance the fight had wrought over the cemetery. For a moment the world seemed to stand exactly still. Every leaf in every tree, every star in the sky, the dogs themselves; it was all suspended in time, hanging in the air, until reality came crashing back down like a giant wave. Intense, hot pain shot up Minos’ leg with frightening ferocity, and for the first time in a long time he realised that he could be in trouble. He remembered – all to well, sometimes – the fates of those in the ring who had earned a broken or dislocated leg. It was a death sentence, nothing more, nothing less. A weak spot devastatingly obvious to even an inexperienced fighter. Panic, under the guise of adrenaline, consumed his body for a full moment until he heaved backwards out of instinct, feeling his leg come free and stand back down on solid ground at last. The smallest mercy had allowed some hope to remain, and he discovered with the tiniest sigh of relief that some feeling remained in his tattered limb. Whatever had happened, it wasn’t completely broken. No matter how much pain it would cause him (and judging by what he had to go by so far, this was a lot), it was something he could fight through, at least until this ordeal was over. If there was a God, it had allowed Minos the smallest amount of pity today.
Gritting his teeth and bracing for one last shot, the cream coloured dog gathered all the strength he had left for another go. His sides rose and fell with mounting intensity as a desperate roar bellowed forth for the final time, and once again he launched himself forwards, this time headed right back towards the wound he had managed to tear open previously. Only now, at the last minute, his aim changed and he headed straight for her legs, a maddening ferocity burning in his eyes. If he could get her back down on the floor again, this time from a better angle, he may gain the upper hand. And with the end tantalisingly close, that was all he needed.
Re: Another cog in the murder machine [c] « Reply #7 on Nov 24, 2009, 12:35pm »
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»»Cordelia stiffened at the sound of the crack, the feel of it. Had she been hurt? This momentary confusion seemed to drag on forever as her breath caught and she waited to feel a pain that she had never felt before. Nothing. The same throbbing pain from the fresh wounds on her side and shoulder, but nothing more came to her. Stormy blue eyes were fixated on Minos, paying close attention to herself, but also not forgetting that she was in a fight. His soft sigh of relief confused her, but the pain she saw on his face only made her believe even more that she had hurt him, not the other way around. Still, cautiously she relaxed and then flexed her tightly bound muscles, testing for pain. The pain in her shoulder pulsed, but she was already becoming used to its annoyance, her side tinged with pain as she shifted, causing her to rethink her movements.
»»By either this small, fractional movement or by his own timing the ghostly fighter came at the shepherd mix once more, his target crystal clear. With a weakening will power Cordelia tensed, it was too late to dodge the attack, and yet, she did not feel the pain in her side like she had expected. Oddly enough her hind legs gave out with a puzzling crack of the joints, the pain was immediate, even with the adrenaline. The feeling of his teeth firmly placed in her hind leg, around the knee region, was excruciating and caused a growling whimper to gurgle softly in her throat as she pushed up on her good fore limb and then used his hind legs as leverage to hold her up in the odd position so she could curl in on herself. The feeling of muscle tearing, being forced apart by some action was distant in her mind as her eyes and thoughts became trained on one image.
»»With an exhausted grunt she pushed off the ground, twisting in on herself in an acrobatic way, the momentum carrying her far enough in towards him so she could once come within range of that same, now injured, leg of his. With jaws ready to close in on the limb before her momentum would fall and she would be forced back down on to her side, hoping to pull the limb with enough force to cripple him to the ground, just as she was. Cordelia, surprisingly, had pushed aside the better part of her pain, and was left with an exhausted energy, her muscles were screaming for a rest, but they were being fed adrenaline at the same time, dulling the urgency for rest. Still, her sides rose and fell in obvious gasps for air, her frame had begun a gentle tremor, either from shock or from lack of energy, the reason was still unknown to her.
»»Between whatever was held in her tightly clenched jaws, a smile tugged at her lips because it was not the fight she saw, it was her reason to fight. Darrius. A fear rolled off her, interpreted many ways most likely, but only she knew it was the fear of losing this fight, this very important battle to keep the Cemetery and the Iron Battalion. For Darrius. For those that depended on the Battalion, though they were few.
--done, but I'm going to check for errors real fast in all my posts... with all corrections--
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Re: Another cog in the murder machine [c] « Reply #10 on Nov 24, 2009, 7:02pm »
Bear with me; first judging.
I didn't see many errors in neither of your posts. Over all, it was a very interesting fight. Vixen: To say, frankly, I was quite excited when reading your posts. You blended Minos's emotions perfectly with the fighting maneuvers and all the other actions, and was able to keep my attention going. Though, I had to re-read maybe one sentence, but I finally understood after that. It was a very vivid post.
Fizz: You post, also, was pretty great. I loved how you had Cordelia thinking about things like "this is for Darrius", etc etc. But, it seemed to lose my interest at a few spots; it was sort of bland and dry, but was overall great to read.
Mino's Wins
Feel free to have it judged again if you don't agree with my decision. Great fight guys! Very intense!
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Re: Another cog in the murder machine [c] « Reply #13 on Nov 26, 2009, 12:19pm »
Vixen – Pros: Very nice entrance for Minos. The imagery throughout your posts is excellent – vivid, but not cloying. You did well portraying Minos’ heartlessness, and mixing his motivation for fighting with the fight itself. Your posts are very active and interesting to read – they move quickly, and aren’t bogged down with unnecessary description.
Cons: Some minor errors – “until he something up ahead caught his eye.” “But through some feat of strength he didn’t even knew he had” Some issues with clarity – but they were few and far between, and I could usually figure them out.
Fizz – Pros: Again, nicely done with Cordelia’s motivation – I like how you mentioned Darrius and such in your posts.
Cons: Your sentences are pretty complex, and a lot of clarity is lost with the amount of commas present. I would suggest separating clauses, and separating ideas, so it’s more clear what you’re trying to get across. Your posts move slower – which isn’t necessarily a bad thing, but it’s not what I’m looking for in a fight post. Some missed commas – something you really need to watch for if you’re going to have longish sentences.
Vixen and Minos are the winners. Great job to both of you, though, this was a fun fight to read. :3